A rhythm counted in Japanese
The familiar tanka pattern is 5–7–5–7–7 Japanese sound units, usually described as morae. It does not count printed characters or require 31 English syllables in translation. A single written character may be read with several morae, so pronunciation supplies the count. Actual poems can depart from the basic pattern: extra morae are called jiamari, and fewer morae jitarazu.
Earlier waka also included chōka, repeating five- and seven-sound phrases before a 5–7–7 ending, and sedōka, with 5–7–7 followed by 5–7–7. The later association of waka with tanka should not narrow the entire earlier tradition to one form.
Read the rhythm in a poem
Man’yōshū 1–28, attributed to Empress Jitō, reads “春過ぎて/夏来るらし/白たへの/衣干したり/天の香具山”. Nara’s Man’yō Culture Museum supplies the reading はるすぎて/なつきたるらし/しろたへの/ころもほしたり/あまのかぐやま.
Count ha-ru-su-gi-te as five and na-tsu-ki-ta-ru-ra-shi as seven. The final phrase, a-ma-no-ka-gu-ya-ma, is also seven. In sense, spring has passed and summer seems to have arrived, with white garments drying on Mount Kagu. Shirotae no, associated with clothing, is a makurakotoba. The museum’s kana transcription retains へ; the pronunciation aid counts its reading here as e.
Five phrases you can count
春過ぎて|はるすぎて|ha-ru-su-gi-te|5
夏来るらし|なつきたるらし|na-tsu-ki-ta-ru-ra-shi|7
白たへの|しろたへの|shi-ro-ta-e-no|5
衣干したり|ころもほしたり|ko-ro-mo-ho-shi-ta-ri|7
天の香具山|あまのかぐやま|a-ma-no-ka-gu-ya-ma|7
Words can make several connections at once
Waka can make a short sound sequence serve several relationships. A makurakotoba conventionally accompanies a word; kakekotoba turns on two meanings of the same sound; engo builds related vocabulary; honkadori asks the reader to hear an earlier poem within a new one.
Kare joins absence to withering
In “山里は冬ぞさびしさまさりける人めも草もかれぬと思へば”, winter intensifies the loneliness of a mountain village. Kare connects people withdrawing or ceasing to visit, 離れ, with grass withering, 枯れ. Human absence and a seasonal change occupy the same sound.
The village’s loneliness thus involves both human contact and the seasonal landscape: absent visitors and withered grass meet in one word.
Clothing words carry a second thread
In the eastward journey of Ise monogatari, a traveller responds to an acrostic task using kakitsubata: “唐衣着つつなれにし妻しあればはるばるきぬる旅をしぞ思ふ”. Its five phrases begin ka, ki, tsu, ha and ta, supplying the acrostic requested in the story.
Nare connects clothing worn through use, 褻れ, with accustomed intimacy, 慣れ. Tsuma means a wife, 妻, while also evoking a garment’s edge, 褄; harubaru, far away, evokes haru, 張る, stretching cloth. Karagoromo, a robe, introduces this clothing vocabulary, drawing familiar life with a wife into the traveller’s longing. Engo names this network of related words.
An older rain poem inside Teika’s snow
An earlier poem places a traveller in rain at Sano without a house for shelter: “苦しくも降りくる雨か三輪の崎佐野のわたりに家もあらなくに”. Teika’s poem reads “駒とめて袖うちはらふかげもなし佐野のわたりの雪の夕暮れ”.
Sano and the absence of shelter remain. Rain becomes snow; stopping a horse, brushing a sleeve and evening light make a new scene. Recognizing the earlier wording allows the reader to perceive both continuity and alteration.